Category: Craft of Writing


The Value of Critiques

So it turns out I only wrote half the novel I thought I had. Apparently, the other main character needs a whole thread of his own, from his viewpoint.

How did I find this out? My wonderful critique group, Denver Fiction Writers, told me. Well, what they told me was that they did not like the guy (my other main character) at ALL, and thought that what the female lead was doing for him was not at all justified. And they also told me that too much of the novel was happening offscreen.

In both cases, these were things I sort of knew about the story, but didn’t know how to fix, and certainly never put together into writing the other half of the novel in the male lead’s point of view.

This is why we have our work read by others!

Around the Interwebs

A couple of agent blogs have come to my attention in the last few days, and since I had commentary on both, I thought I’d mention them here.

The first is by outstanding agent Nathan Bransford. This post was brought to my attention by our own Jeff Kirvin. It’s entitled ‘The One Question Authors Should Never Ask Themselves When Reading’. Go and read it. No, go ahead. I’ll wait.

Don’t forget to bookmark his blog. I highly recommend it for writers at any stage.

I really like the points he made in that article, and agree. But I don’t think ‘do I like this’ is a useless question to ask yourself – as long as you don’t stop there. Consider WHY you like what you’re reading, or don’t like it. Once you’ve read it, pick it apart and see what bits you most enjoyed. Where did you skip past paragraphs, or get bumped out of the story’s grip on you, and how could the author have prevented that?

Reading with an eye to how you would do the same thing is an occupational hazard of being an author. You should still get lost in fiction – we’re readers first, after all – but there’s nothing wrong with admiring cool things as they go by, tucking them away in your head for later. And nothing wrong with reading bad fiction and seeing how you could do better.

The second article was brought to you by the magic of Twitter. This is from top agent Rachelle Gardener, entitled Managing Expectations. Go forth… read, bookmark, return.

The next to last paragraph resonated most strongly with me. As authors in a rapidly changing publishing environment, it’s really required of us to keep our expectations under control.

It’s always a wrench for a new author to realize what ‘getting published’ really means to them – usually a far cry from what they thought. Certainly the beginning of a journey, not the end.

But nowadays, with things changing so fast the word ‘book’ doesn’t even mean what it did when you were a child, it’s even more strange. We would be shooting ourselves in the foot to hold any unrealistic expectation. Ambition and optimism are good – expectation must be fluid. Discover the difference between what you desire and what you expect. The world may give you the former, if you work for it… the latter can cripple you.

Progress

Heart of Gold is nearly finished. Since the main body of the work was written at such headlong speed, and since I have a terrible head for names, what it is mostly going to need is a serious going-over for inconsistencies and mixed up names of places and people.

However, it will be nice just to finish it! I’m hoping the ending is better than they usually are. Endings, the last quarter of the book, seems to be where I start suffering. Even if I have it laid out ahead of time. I’m not sure why.

Any thoughts?

Sound the retreat!

So Denver Fiction Writers, my truly phenomenal critique group, is considering doing two amazing things this year. In the summer sometime, probably in late June or early July, we’re planning a writer’s retreat. We’ll sneak into the mountains, rent a cabin, and allow no one else to come. We’ll write, perhaps we’ll shop, we’ll definitely giggle, and the television will stay off.

We might also be trying to get a chance to host a panel at the Mile Hi Convention, in October. Wouldn’t THAT be cool!

Denver Fiction Writers

Some changes have been made recently to the Denver Fiction Writers website.

We are a group of fiction writers who meet weekly, face to face, to critique and discuss one another’s work. This invaluable piece in a writer’s toolbox is useful for learning how to judge your writing and that of others… expands your horizons as you read work in progress different from your own… teaches tact and accountability… motivates for good work habits… and develops that tough skin you’ll need if you’re planning to submit anything.

We share not only opinions, but friendship, with discussions of everything from life in the writing world through recent movies, current news and publication woes. If you live in the Denver area, consider joining us!

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